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VISION and the SCARLET WITCH Marvel Comic book Issue # 4 FEB VF+ | |
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VISION AND SCARLET WITCH #2 THE WHIZZER | |
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VISION&SCARLET WITCH VOL2 NO1-NO12 OCT85/SEP86 | |
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"VISION AND THE SCARLET WITCH" #1, #2, #3, #4 | |
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Vision and the Scarlet Witch #1 VFNM 1992 | |
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MARVEL ~ VISION & SCARLET WITCH ~ COMPLETE 12 ISSUE MINI-SERIES ~ 1982 | |
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Vision & Scarlet Witch, #1, N/M, 1982, Direct Edition, great Halloween gift | |
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Vision-Scarlet Witch, #2 v2, N/M, 1985, Direct Edition, great Halloween gift | |
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Vision Scarlet
what do you think of my poem?
hello i just wrote this poem and i wanted to know what you thought of it? I'm not that great yet but I'm trying. I have written several more before this one.
dreaming
riding in a car
snowing,wind
thinking
black ice
go flying,spin
no seat belt
cry out,cry out in pain
life flash's before you
think of all mistakes
happy times,sad times
who will really care
blood everywhere
blink,slow breathing
vision blurry with red scarlet
hear someone yelling
crying out
try to yell for loved ones
no voice
tears fall
hoping just wishing there alright
just me, just let it be me
none else
it doesn't have to end
not now,not this way
the pain and love
so colorful but dark
died so young
so full of life
wake up
screaming
grabbing for breath
everyone runs in
your alive,everyone alive
cry out loud
can't stop
out of bed
say i love you
don't let go
never let go
listening to dream
lights on
can't go to sleep again
Technically, it's ok, but I didn't really like it. Sorry! I know how hard it is to put feelings into writing. Here's what I'd tell you:
1. it's all a little cliche ("no seat belt""loved ones""full of life" etc..)
to fix this -- be more symbolic, maybe use some of the underlying themes (dark, blood, red, loss) to form a few symbols that can be brought throughout the poem.
Good Luck!
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The Avengers Vision and The Scarlet Witch PB Book Marvel Comics NEW CONDITION! | |
1 Bid | US $3.95 | 20h 9m |
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VISION SCARLET WITCH VOL ONE 1-4 FULL RUN Marvel 1982 House M | |
0 Bid | US $2.99 | 23h 56m |
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VISION and the SCARLET WITCH #1 (1982) NEAR MINT | |
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US $1.24 | 1d 2h 7m |
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AVENGERS ORIGINS VISION THOR SCARLET WITCH QUICKSILVER LUKE CAGE ANTMAN WASP SET | |
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US $15.99 | 25d 20h 18m |
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Vision & The Scarlet Witch: Series 2 #1-12 (1985) Complete Set, Marvel, Avengers | |
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lot of 56 - 17 Ultimate spiderman, FF, ultimates & Vision & Scarlet witch & more | |
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US $29.99 | 1d 23h 54m |
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Bowen Designs Vision and Scarlet Witch busts!!! | |
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VISION and the SCARLET WITCH Marvel Comic book Issue # 4 FEB VF+ | |
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VISION and the SCARLET WITCH Marvel Comic book Issue # 2 FEB VF+ | |
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2 Bowen Design Marvel Mini Busts Scarlet Witch 1521/5000 Vision 1388/5000 | |
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VISION AND SCARLET WITCH #2 THE WHIZZER | |
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VISION AND SCARLET WITCH #1 Marvel Comics Limited Series | |
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VISION AND SCARLET WITCH #3 WONDER MAN/GRIM REAPER | |
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VISION&SCARLET WITCH VOL2 NO1-NO12 OCT85/SEP86 | |
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"VISION AND THE SCARLET WITCH" #1, #2, #3, #4 | |
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US $12.00 | 3d 17h 47m |
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Vision and the Scarlet Witch #1 VFNM 1992 | |
0 Bid | US $.99 | 3d 19h 47m |
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MARVEL ~ VISION & SCARLET WITCH ~ COMPLETE 12 ISSUE MINI-SERIES ~ 1982 | |
0 Bid | US $25.00 | 3d 20h 22m |
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Vision & Scarlet Witch, #1, N/M, 1982, Direct Edition, great Halloween gift | |
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US $9.99 | 3d 23h 59m |
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Vision-Scarlet Witch, #2 v2, N/M, 1985, Direct Edition, great Halloween gift | |
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US $9.99 | 3d 23h 59m |
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Vision and the Scarlet Wtich #1-3 Marvel Comics 1982 | |
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Avengers-Vision/Scarlet Witch-Hawkeye-Falcon Limited Series 22 Books Variant | |
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Vision and the Scarlet Witch # 3 (January 1983) - Marvel Comics | |
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WEST COAST AVENGERS 42-60 BYRNE NM SCARLET WITCH VISION HAWKEYE | |
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Vision and the Scarlet Witch, Marvel Comics, Nos. 1-4 | |
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THE VISION AND THE SCARLET WITCH # 1 LIMITED SERIES | |
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VISION AND THE SCARLET WITCH # 1 VF 8.0 1982 | |
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The Vision and the Scarlet Witch with Spiderman #11 (Aug 1986) VG | |
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VISION AND THE SCARLET WITCH VOL.1 #1-4 AVENGERS WONDERMAN | |
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